All Comments on 'Screwed By The Courts'

by HornyHenry

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LalahLalahabout 16 years ago
Need some work.

I thought the story still needed some work; it wasn't realistic. Once inside the car there were no reasons she shouldn't have tried getting out the door or on her side, and if it was locked screaming for help a little before accepting her fate. The car may very well be locked from the outside and possibly soundproof for some reason, but she should still have given a try for freedom.

YoursSINSerelyYoursSINSerelyover 14 years ago
Exciting Read

Well done, Horny Henry!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Very hot!

Love this one! Especially where he tells her he's going to fuck her like she's never been fucked before. I also liked that fact that he was at least a little compassionate. Great wording!

AmyfriendAmyfriendabout 13 years ago
Payback?

I'm not condoning what he did, but it sounds like she deserved some kind of payback and backed herself into an almost impossible corner.

Good story, thanks for the read.

jtwheelsjtwheelsalmost 5 years ago
Call it Fuck me Fuck you

Pretty good

I am sure many of us when we are screwed over by system want to get revenge

It should not be impersonal he personalized it

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