All Comments on 'Mister'

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LeBrozLeBrozabout 16 years ago
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There's more than meets the eye here in this bit on being submissive.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
A very lovely poem

I think, however biased I might be. Tattoos require pricks, you know. Just saying. ;)

twelveoonetwelveooneabout 16 years ago
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I like the structure of this, the word choice, title can use a little more interest. The ending is just a little.. tooo.

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