All Comments on 'Spying on My Girlfriend... Ch. 01'

by Starman2345

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
dont stop now

give us one more chapter with this. it is fucking hot

Pantyboy11Pantyboy11about 16 years ago
fantastic

wow loved it. nothing hotter than a schoolgirl getting nailed by a dirty old man, especially if he is not that good looking.

please please give us more, turn her into a little cock loving slut who adores old men.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Excellent

That's one of the BEST stories I've read in a long time. Hot, erotic, well-written... thanks for sharing and for the hard work that went into it.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Nice

Keep up the good work

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
just another puke sissyboy like watching

who like watching someone else fucking your girl and try to act like you mad.stupidity at its' best.tell the dad and leave,unless he like sloppy seconds.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
I like it and appreciate the concept and story

Unlike the reviewer below who isn't mature enough to handle an erotic and stimulating story like this. Oh and yes and by the way I'm not the author but I do like sloppy seconds and watching my girl have sex with one or more other guys. Live a little and stop being so narrow minded. That is, don't knock it until you've tried it.

jimewestjimewestabout 16 years ago
Excellent!

Very nice seduction scene.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
This is a schoolgirl's fantasy come true

So, so, hot. I loved how you focused on how nasty and hot it was for a fat older man to take a tiny young, barely legal schoolgirl. God, I know I've fantasized about that a hundred times.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
oh my........

oh my.. i really liked the story....... you can not stop now please.......

how about next time he and daddy watch together !! and after that chapter 3 he watches daddy and old man fuck his girlfriend..........

Starman2345Starman2345almost 16 years agoAuthor
comments from the author, Starman.

Of course I gave my own story 100! Ha! Firstly, I would like to thank all the support from the readers who take time out to write insightful and appreciative comments. It is you whom I write for. I don't get paid for this - your comments are payment enough for the hours I put into these works, so thank you for leaving them – I read every single one.

Now, for those who continue to make derisive and, basically, stupid comments, I have to say that if you really can't tell the difference between fantasy and reality and lambast my works as if they were actually happening: get a grip! You are yelling at a fictional character! It’d be funny if it weren’t so astounding. Oh, what the hell, it IS funny! Secondly, and most amazingly, why if you despise these stories so, have you read all four parts?

Anyway, thanks for reading. I do this for fun - mine and yours. Cheers, Starman.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Would really love more...

I've enjoyed the series greatly, and in my eyes the first is still the best of them. Leigh's reluctance and the genuine sense of uncertainty about how she would react is probably what makes it my favourite - in the later chapters we already know she's a slut, but they're still fun anyway! Speaking of which, are there more to come?

Talon_86Talon_86about 11 years ago
Better every time

I've had this story favorited since it was published and every so often I come back to read it again, and every time I'm blown away by how much I love this series. I wish you had written more than these four. If you're thinking of writing additional chapters or starting something new, I encourage you to do so!

CuckyJimmyCuckyJimmyover 9 years ago
Cuckolds delight

I love cuckold stories and plan to keep reading.

oodaddyslilgirlyoodaddyslilgirlyalmost 4 years ago
so great!

One of the better short stories on this page! Cant wait to read whats next. =)

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Great story

You have a great mind that makes my hand move !!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
Loved (πŸ’š) it: β˜…β˜…β˜…β˜…β˜… (5)

πŸ‘πŸ‘!

:)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Lol sounds like my bf has wrote this as i love my dads friend fucking me i had a crush on him since i was about 12 thinking about him doing me. It finally happened when i accidently on purpose made sure he seen me naked one day and it was as good as id imagined the best sex ever. We fuck any chance we get and its been a few firsts for me with him like first cum in my mouth first in my bum and a few others like pee play. With him it isnt rushed like guys my age who want to fuck and cum he takes time making sure i cum plenty before he does. He has suggested trying moresums as he describes it where him and a friend share and im intrigued and have told him maybe if i like the other guy. Honestly although i havnt told him one of my dirty fantasys if it were to happen is to be fucked in pussy and my ass at the same time. I happy enjoying sex with him even as he is almost 35 years older than me the sex is just the best. From Lucy xo

pummel187pummel187almost 2 years ago

PUSSY! "still turn heads at 25 years of age"? WHAT THE LITERAL FUCK?

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