All Comments on 'Body Walking'

Your poem has been recommended in the New Poems Review thread on Literotica's Poetry Feedback and Discussion forum. Thanks for the read!

"Hold you with my silken smile" mmmmmm can see it too !

I could take this poem, word by word, and write a 5,000 word essay about it. But that would never equal the poem. Great use of language; rarely, if ever, have I read a poem that was prettier.

What I liked most is the almost reprise.(You did say, just take.) You show an adroit use of repitition.