O it is going to be so long to have to wait to see what happens next!!! Awsome story so filled with passion. It is great how you actually feel how the characters are...Please hurry!
Oh so cruel to stop at this point! I could feel the raw and primitive lust between the two...the scene was dripping with animal attraction. I absolutely adore Callum. I'm anxiously awaiting the next chapter!
You said that the story was short, but not that you would be cruel to us! Please continue. There was a spelling error fairly early on "hew" instead of "her", otherwise another finely crafted bit of literotica
to leave us high and wet like that (not dry, who could be after that)...inhumane and unfair..*sits and sulks*
Why you torture us?? Its so good I loooove this story! Its getting hot too! I really hope she falls for callum I think he is a awesome guy on the inside that and I would sure as hell fall for him!
But very short. I love the story but you are only just giving us a taste. Please update soon with a little more next time. Please, please :)
No! You didn't stop right there!!!
That's Literoticus Interruptus :( ...... Great story, highly sensual and arousing update, and I'll forgive you if you please update soon - lol!
Hey, thanks to that someone who caught my grammatical error! One can only catch so many mistakes alone.
should be considered illegal to submit a teaser chapter such as that!
Each chapter piques my interest more. This is the first time I've ever read a story about a centaur but I'm enjoying it immensely! I love your imagination and can't wait to read more about the developing romance between Callum and Lila!
Please hurry and write the next chapter! This was so short - but soooooo gooood.
Ahhh, why do you tease us so? Even without touching Lila, Callum could melt a girl with the intensity of his gaze. Love the way he just took charge right there and pushed her up against the wall! I also enjoy the scenes with Thayer and Rose. They are so sweet together. Please don't leave us hanging for long! Thanks!
Do centaurs and their mates go to a doctor or a vet,when a pregnancy is underway?
They would confer with a midwife, as many people did in the older days. Herbal medicine and healings are used, as centaurs live off the land. Hope this answers your question!
Leaving us hanging like that. Will he take her or not? I think this on is even better than the other Centaur story. Can't wait til there's more
I was in the middle of masturbating!!! How could you??? Nooooooo!!!!
Bah! How could you?!? That was so cruel to end the chapter like that! Why end when it was so good?
Your writing is captivating!!
why did u leave us hanging like that! i want more! these r really good.....even a lil better than the other Century stories! ohh and pplease dont keep me waiting like last time!
U love this story but i cant access beyond chapter 3
phew! I am fanning myself over here from all that tension. Delicious!
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