All Comments on 'Elizabeth Angela Williams'

The story has great potential. The writing style is good, but it would be brilliant if you did some proof-reading to catch the little typos and grammatical errors. However, despite those little things, I still give it 100.

The story starts off good, would like for you to finish it, has lots of promises.

This story has lots that can be done with it. You need to think of just how you want to finish it. What was the leed up to how she got to be where she is? Why is she doing it, how does she feel about it and what will she do after it is done?

Great start Finish it, Please...

Um, who is this guy? If, as I hope and pray, it's her own big strapping boy with his fat young cock, then all is well. It's natural for a mother to tremble the first time she shows her wet cunt to her own boy. The kid is probably doing some trembling of his own. It won't be long before he sticks his sturdy prick up his mother's twat, unloads his young balls up her loving mommy-hole, and all her trembling goes away.

I think 6 years is long enuf to wait. Take this sad excuse for a story off!!!!

Remarkably high-quality non-content.

great start, will you ever continue this? seems like it could be a hot story

I imagine Alena Croft as the mom, with that sexey smile about to show.

'cmon, where's part 2 ????