Fun story,thanks, could be another part or more.
...in other genres, like action or suspense. Unfortunately, in erotica they are just a way of torturing your readers, unless you post all the chapters together. So PLEASE hurry with the next ten or twelve chapters!
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What, are you saying that everybody doesn't cum that much every time? LOL, it's a C O M E D Y...
This is a wonderful story about getting caught! It is well written and opens up for the possibility of much more action. I hope the story continues.
This is really well written and I found it close enough to believable to be very erotic. Great subject. Thanks for sharing.
Don't usually go for the exhibitionist stories but this one is fun.
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Fun story,thanks, could be another part or more.
Great cliff-hangers work really well...
...in other genres, like action or suspense. Unfortunately, in erotica they are just a way of torturing your readers, unless you post all the chapters together. So PLEASE hurry with the next ten or twelve chapters!
HOW much come? Too unrealistic, sorry.
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Oh Yee of Little Semen
What, are you saying that everybody doesn't cum that much every time?
LOL, it's a C O M E D Y...
OOPS! The best laid plans......
This is a wonderful story about getting caught! It is well written and opens up for the possibility of much more action. I hope the story continues.
enjoyed it!
This is really well written and I found it close enough to believable to be very erotic. Great subject. Thanks for sharing.
Cute
Don't usually go for the exhibitionist stories but this one is fun.
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