All Comments on 'Dirge'

Like the way you used variations of the first line in each subsequent strophe's first line. Helps tie it together and gives a feel of the procession. Too bad there were a couple spots in the audio where it broke up; hopefully it was just in my puter having a hiccup.

Great poem, very stately and elegaic and your reading does it justice. Really terrific job! Thanks for the read. :-)