All Comments on 'It Just Happened Ch. 06'

for Ben. That is why she is helping him out with the credit card companies and is very jealous of Beverly. Ben, you don't have to win the war, just give both of them eough rope and they will hang themselves.

I'm not going to try to predict where the author is going to take this story, that's up to him. But he is building things nicely, and characters are growing, changing and interacting in an interesting and realistic way. Well done.

to short. Lit will only post one ch per day so why bother with that?

when jen finds out Ben's older brother lied about everything and she was ahem "tricked" but he is sterile she is going to make a play for Ben.

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If that happens... Does anyone have any second of a doubt that Ben would not take her back?

Ben needs money, he refuses to take his inheiritance so it goes to his brother who stole his girl. How does this make any sense? It is much worse from his position to have to come back, live under his brother's roof, work for his brother, depend on his brother and his former girlfriend for everything?

A good story otherwise, just wish the chapters were longer. At this rate, it will take 8 years to tell what happened 4 years ago.

Gets more interesting with each chapter. Great characters.

No. You're not that good...just similar situation