Sensational. Just sensational!
please write more and continue the story "playing with mom"
What a wonderful and sexy story. Very well done, like the rest of your writings.
Made me so very wet, and I wish I had been riding along with you both.
I hope there is a Chapter 2............
Dad promised Roger a trip to Europe. Mom wanted to go to Europe. Sounds like good times.
I usually don't take time to read the longer stories but I couldn't stop reading this one. Would like to know what happens next. Well written story.
Absolutely loved this story and then read your others and enjoyed them as well. You have such a great sense of eroticism and the way you slowly work your reader into a frenzy. The scene while they were riding horseback was amazing and then in the kitchen later on! Totally erotic and yes I want more!!
I enjoyed the heck out of this one. One of the best mom/son stories made. I just didn't like the anal parts but gave it a 100 on content anyway. Leave the anal off next time and you have an even better story!
love the whole text of the story and for sure loved the anal keep it up
You have a very good way of describing viewpoints, and how the son viewed his mother's body, like when he was describing her breasts, how they moved gently up and down as she was riding. The dad was sort of a cardboard cut-out, and we never know why he was so absent from their lives. Why he would rather ride ahead and have so little to do with them. But obviously, the point of the story was the surprising turn in the relationship between mom and son. I didn't like the anal parts either, but the rest was really good.
Excellent story, maybe the father can't come on the Europe trip, but insist's that the son & mother go. Hint,hint.
I definitely like your stuff...you understand that there is more to erotica than just describing the sex...all the set up and everything is awesome as usual!
Loved it. I enjoyed the way you built up the sexual tension and then the act itself... Wow.. I felt pretty wet
I defy anybody with an ounce of sexuality,both male and female to read one of your stories without getting a little hot under the collar.Well done.
Great story, demands a sequal.
they are the best stories ive read, need lots more,thanks
This story has a sensational buildup and the descriptions slowly build to a number of very exciting climaxes. Certainly one of the best erotic stories I have read and it follows very closely your other story of mom-son love. The pace is wonderful and it has all the elements of reality necessary for truly great erotic writing with very few errors. Congratulations and please write more.
If Roger ever wants a change from fucking his mom here is one pussy which will be waiting for him. Your story left me dripping, but frustrated because my own son is out for the evening!
Quite a story! I really loved it. Thanks for having written it. Give us more.
I loved this story. i'll never look at horseback riding with my mom in the same way.
I would love to read more of the story following their return home after the ride in the mountains. Perhaps mother and son could take a vacation to Europe, since that is what they wanted to do at the start. Maybe you could expand on the father's desire for his son to make sure his mother was happy on their ride, there should be a lot of possibilities with that direction.
This SUPERSEX tale of fun in the high mountains really hits the mark. (We honeymooned at a cabin in Rocky Mountain Natl. Park.) Let's forget the horses and ride each other, eh? Welcome to my sleeping bag! Is the old man's prostate dead? So what's ahead for mother and son?
loved the setting and all the fun and humour that evolved along the trek - well done - you most certainly write a good tale.
what a story, couldn't help wishing I'd had the guts and oppportunity to push my mother that far.
A Sandra Bullock type for the mother and me for the son. All kidding aside the fucking on horseback scene is nuclear hot. This one is my favorite. Keep up the good work.
wow this was one hell of a story. I couldn't stop reading untill i read it all. The sence on the horse was fantastic. Write some more about this family
But, I just couldn't help myself. I absolutely had to read it again. That is one of the hottest mother/son stories I have ever encountered. I don't know if you are into sequels, but I would love to see you do more with these two. Thank you again for a really entertaining story.
I love the moments where they have sex with the farher nearby. great story
Another very hot story. The plot was a little weaker compared to other of your fantastic works, but you delivered once again. I consider this one to be funnier than other of your works... I can't tell you why though, hehe. Writing somehow comical scenes here and there adds for some variety and laughts in stories, and I think no one would complain about them. Maybe it's about the scenario and how clueless Dad looked in this story. You are certainly one of my favourite Literotica authors. I hope I'll be able to read your stories in years to come. Thanks a lot for you effort and keep up the great work. You rule, alwayswantedto! ^__^
The unanswered questions just added to the story. I realized I wanted answers but they didn't matter. This was a great story about getting one's needs met and met with love.
Every once in a while, I find a story that captivates me. This is one. Please write a sequel to this. it is excellent.
That was frickin' awesome! Wicked sex scenes.
Great author! Very sexy interplay between him and her. Very well written.
The built-up of the story was excellent. The inner urge to do, the anticipation, the attempts made, all leading up was excellent. You played well with the fear-of-getting-caught angle.
The one about making the horse do the fucking was an incredible one -- one of the best "effortless fuck" dreams IMHO.
The only real criticism is that you blew up the last sex scene. It ended up merely as a fulfillment of son's dream, or over-assertiveness of the son's sexual desires. The meadow-like scene coming at the end would have been nicer. Or else, you could have made the final bidding that of the mother. At least, you should have brought in a feel of cant-get-away-from-your-sweat-sex.
Need similar stories. At-least a sequel.
There is scope for sequel, if you add in other emotional aspects of the story. You could may be test the resolve of the two, by bringing in some twist in the story, or you could bring in a flash-flood, isolating the mom and son pair once more, but with a different setting now. I mean to say, the relationship aspect is not yet tightly sealed in the case of this story. So you can definitely write a sequel.
You had a great series going for you, then you couldn't stop yourself from adding fisting. Ask yourself, "How many readers find fisting erotic?" When I read about the opening to fisting, I moved onto another author.
I've read most of your stories.. Some I've read over and over, this one is my favorite.. I hope you make a sequel on this one.. Your stories are the best I've read so far, great work..
I have read this story numerous times. I never tire of your writings.
Wow.... Reminded me of the lovely romp we had back in the village riding in a ox drawn cart!
at the beginning mother is seducitve and the story hot. In the end becomes the son dominant and the story sucks! always the same! fuck your guy-dominant-shit!
I didn't like the hair pulling and her son forcing him self on her (fucking her) after she said no...it would be hot if his mom forced herself on him...
The story lacked the teasing and reluctance which are usually your trade marks but I loved sex near dad and cuckolding...good story
NOW THAT'S A RIDE, THIS KID KNOWS HOW TO HANDLE A HORSE. AND HIS MOM. THIS KID WAS SO HORNY THE HORSES SHOULD WATCH OUT, OR HE WOULD BE RIDING THEM IN MORE WAYS THEM ONE. GOOD READ I LIKED IT. KEEP THEM RIDING PARTNER. A FAN..............LAROC OF AGES
I never tire of reading this story. Words cannot describe how much I enjoy it.
I've read this a lot of times and never get tired of it. Thank you for this. I hope you could do a sequel perhaps including the other riders and of course her son. Keep on writing, you have a gift.
and without losing any of my original enjoyment. That's just one reason that you are my favorite author.
Thank you so much.
Hot but I dont see how you could fuck on a horse, that would be 135 pounds of shear force on his cock, ouch! and when you think about it his cock couldn' be that hard when he fucked her... not to mention keeping it silent from your dad... I guess I dont really like stories where the son is fucking her and the dad is 20 paces ahead... I dont really understand how the Dad didnt hear her moans, twice... Jhust not that realistic, I like the idea though
That's all. Just Brilliant. (though I do agree with the comment below about sex on a horse. Seems like it would hurt the guy. Since I'm neither an equestrian or a man, though, I really wouldn't know. Of course, when I really think about it, having sex on top or anywhere near livestock weirds me out). That being said I could read this story again and again
loved their hot sex and the build-ups to it-well done, thanks
I enjoyed your story very much. It was well thought out and flowed nicely. The sex was great and believable.
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