Get dressed. A left to his stomach, a right cross to the jaw or nose. Stop by the hospital for an after rape examination. Make sure they take a DNA sample.
File a police report. Sue him. Destroy his career. They wouldn't be doing this again. But because he did none of these they will.
Well, I hope you know to ignore the comments you are sure to get from those folks who come to the non-consent section, read a story, and then get all weird because it involves (gasp) non-consent.
This was a well done tale with an interesting twist. Thanks.
If you allow some shit head senator, to rape this guy and get away with it then your story sucks. Why would you allow some power hungry faggot from Washington, who fucks the rest of us everyday to continue to do so when you have the power of the pen to stop him. Grow some balls and write another chapter. This time get it right. If he was anything other than some fat cat maybe I wouldnt be so upset. LOL
Pretty weird story, I couldnt really grasp why he didnt simply call the newspapers and police immediatly from the hotel? Personally Id bash the senator. But you never know, I mean if they had asked before who knows;)
this is a story people. its fantasy.
....his story. We all know, politicians are capable of any indecency,especially the "family values" neo-con scum.Half points for a somewhat novel idea-pistolpackinpete
Certainly know how to stir'em up huh?...well done. Good story.
that is usually the outcome, TK U MLJ LV NV
...and hilarious feedback. It's interesting how fired up everyone gets about male non-consensual sex vs. the many, many stories here on Lit involving women that don't seem the press the same buttons. Well done.
This one doesn't have the rating it deserves. It's actually as good as the rest of your stories I read. Only in a completely different way...
I was curious about how this would get non-con after I identified Jim. And got caught by surprise nonetheless. I also got angry. Just like your main character. And afterwards I really wondered if I would have walked away like him or would have thanked the senator physically somewhere it doesn't leave marks. Just for releasing tensions...
But actually I can imagine that in a situation like this things go different than expected. And the story wouldn't have been the same if you had him acting like this.
So it leaves mixed feelings. Sadness on one hand and the question if somehow it even may have been an interesting experience - though with some assholes - on the other.
Thing is: The stories that get me thinking like this in the end are the best ones. They are more than just entertainment. They are food for the brain in a way.
So... Thanks. A lot! ;-)
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