All Comments on 'Shared Fantasies Ch. 05'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
The best

I have not found a better tease and denial single story or series of stories here than these. Thanks for writing them.

Thor_in_CaliforniaThor_in_Californiaabout 16 years ago
Pretty intense fantasy

Good build up, good writing, lots of tease and denial as indicated, and very erotic. Jack seems just the right sub for Jessie. My only concern is, when during all the restraint (the day before, the morning of, and then to the point of climax) does Jack ever get to go to the toilet? I realize STD's don't need to happen in fantasy, the amount of semen is always immense, the orgasm is the best ever, and of course, the lady can climax over and over again (and never gets sore labia)! But the toilet is a pretty basic need, correct? To relate to a fantasy, am I asking too much for a bit of realism? Please keep writing.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Made me wet

I've always enjoy reading your stories. This one in particular was very erotic. I hope one day I'll be able to find a partner who'd be willing to let me tease him like this!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
story note

Peter,

Very good story. I've always liked your stuff. One note on the cock & ball harness. I've always found these difficult to use and they never quite fit right. A shoestring seems to work much better in real life and is much less expensive. Also I wondered if any of those devices really hold off an orgasm. No matter how much my balls are pulled down I still have an orgasm once that freight train starts down the tracks! I just wondered if that's me or can guys really stop an orgasm by such means?

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
great story

great story I have to agree your stories capture tease denial the best.This and Krissy story are great fantasy.

jasonnhjasonnhover 14 years ago
Great story

Denial stories are not my thing but this is a great story. It follows the rules of BDSM. They both discussed their fantasies thoroughly beforehand. They both got more than they expected but that's the nature of fantasies. No one was drugged or beat up. The devices used were safe and effective. His wife warned him that the experience would be more intense than he expected and she was right. All his play acting was under his own control. It is a completely different story when someone else is in charge. He was very specific in telling his wife to go beyond his point of endurance and she did what he asked. She made no threats and didn't lie about anything. Did she surprise him, yes. Surprises are what add the spice to fantasies as long as they are not to severe. His wife also warned him that he was going to get more than he bargained for and gave him several opportunities to back out without penalty even after she had demonstrated how he was going to be treated. He knew he might be in over his head and repeatedly chose to continue. Since he was a follower of denial he had to know of the techniques and devices used. He actually got off on the light side for the kinds of things that could have been done to him and the possible duration of the denial. The total time was a week but the intense action was all within a few days. He also requested this by saying he wanted to be horny, indicating some period of time since he had sex. When they were done it was over. The wife immediately returned to her normal loving behavior. There were no implied threats or continuation of denial tactics. All was returned to normal which is what is supposed to happen after a fantasy. You do it and it's over. Sure you might have some take away if it goes really well but only if everyone agrees. As to the wife wanting a repeat. He said he didn't want to do it again anytime soon. His wife essentially said the same about hers. You don't get to do fantasies that your partner is against. For example, if one is against outside partners the other needs to respect that. You don't get to run roughshod over each other. In this case respect for not doing it right away. They can discuss if and when it might be open for discussion again. So overall a good story with the relationship done right. <br><br>

One minor point. I disagree about the safe word. It is not just about stopping hurtful treatment. It is about stopping the whole process when it becomes overwhelming to the person going through it. In these interactions you are putting yourself at emotional and physical risk. The only way that many people would feel comfortable in doing that is to have a safe word that gives them the ultimate control. No one can know their true tolerance to pain and emotional distress ahead of time and our limits one day may be different from them on another day. It is for this exact reason that safe words exist. He should have been given one. If he said it the teasing should have immediately stopped and his restraints released. That's not to say that his wife would then not wish to do it again in the future but they could work through that together.

rico534rico534about 14 years ago
Amazing

Peter,

I have often enjoyed the teased fantasy and this is how I would like it to be in reality. I am sure that when I finally experience the reality it will not meet up to my expectations, but if it did and it outclassed them the way it did for Jack and Jessie then I would be satiated and happy.

My only concern is the amount and volume of release....

Your writing is amazing and I will now be reading your other stories.

Thank you!

OOAAOOAAabout 12 years ago
Congrat

Congratulations!!!!!

Excellent story!!! :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Brilliant

Thank you. You writing touches on those parts of a submissive man that only a submissive man would really grasp. I'm impressed.

mrwidehorizonsmrwidehorizonsalmost 9 years ago
Simply amazing!!!

Wow just wow! I'd love to see another chapter here. Maybe she wants to use a cock cage to keep him honest for an extended period this time? What a great find!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
oh ffs

I got denied satisfaction just reading about it. On and on and on and on, just let him cum for gods sake then we can all go and have a nice cup of tea.

edgemeendlesslyedgemeendlesslyover 1 year ago

WOW!!! This was an amazingly good story. I wanted to Jack. I was on the edge through it all. Hope I get to experience something like that in the near future.

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