All Comments on 'Technologically Declined'

by KarennaC

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AngelineAngelineabout 16 years ago
Love the title

and the idea is great, but the language doesn't live up to the promise of this poem for me. I think it's too prosey, has too much explanation and not enough pure image. I think if you cut back on the telling and stuck with the images, you'd have a very funny sort of smarmy poem here. Thanks for the read. :-)

KOLKOREKOLKOREabout 16 years ago
I extend my sympathy...

Mostly in the same venue as Angeline. My full sympathy though to the core feelings!

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