All Comments on 'Back to the Future Ch. 01'

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Please keep writing, i enjoyed that story.

I liked it very much. To short though. There is going to be chap.2, right?

Not the worst story!! there are others here at lit that are terrible and boring. this is not one of them.

we want to what happens

This chapter isn't long enough to get anything started. It's well writen and it reads like it has been well thought out, and the scenario is good. I think this will be a good and interesting story when it gets started. Thanks......Rich

Only thing I got here is father into research and son lusting after his sexy and horny mother... Could at least add why he likes his mom other then she is hot and maybe some character to the characters.

I'VE READ BETTER, BUT ALSO A LOT WORSE. THIS STORY HAS A LOT GOING FOR IT, (BUT) IT'S SO SHORT TO MAKE IT WORK ,YOU'LL BE WRITING FOREVER. I KNOW YOU HAVE MORE CHAPTERS COMING .(BUT) RETRACE YOUR STEPS AND GIVE SOME STATS ON YOUR THOUGHTS NOT JUST HUMPING MOM. (BUT) I THINK CHAPTER 2 COULD FILL IN A LOT OF BLANKS.THIS SHOULD HELP OUT WITH CHAPTER 3.(BUT) IF NOT JUST KEEP GOING YOU'LL LEARN. IT TAKES TIME. GOOD LUCK.....LAROC OF AGES

gets his big fat prick up his mother's cunt. Come on, kid, your mommy needs your big prick. After all she's done for you, the least you can do it stick it up her cunt and blow your young balls up where you were once a little baby. Maybe give her a baby of your own.

Most of the readers here, probably being of the male persuasion, have made successful attempts at observing out mothers carressingly maul her "kitty-kat"!! Myself, I plead guilty!

He never finishes the story, it's been 7 years

dudes got a time machine but still has keyholes in the house

A great start to what promises to be a well thought out and written story. I look forward to reading the next chapter. As this is my first foray into your writing and the first story you posted here I have added you to my favorites list. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.