Sorry this is a dup....the format said I had to change name but, was already
goodness nourishes and delights again and again. I am in awe at how this beauty seems to pour out of you, like a stream from a source eternal. This one, the dupe before and anything you release here or anywhere.
flow very nice, it especially does in the first few lines. that's something i've yet to accomplish ....don
The first three lines, you come out floating like a butterfly and stinging like a bee. The fourth line is a beautiful transition to just floating. I wish I could write like this.
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