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Trip We Are On

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by Anonymous

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by bluerains02/20/08

duplicated

Sorry this is a dup....the format said I had to change name but, was already
approved ..∑Blue

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by hmmnmm02/20/08

dupe or no

goodness nourishes and delights again and again. I am in awe at how this beauty seems to pour out of you, like a stream from a source eternal. This one, the dupe before and anything you release here or anywhere.

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by dcpoet4402/20/08

this really does ....

flow very nice, it especially does in the first few lines. that's something i've yet to accomplish ....don

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by Bill Dada08/06/08

^

The first three lines, you come out floating like a butterfly and stinging like a bee. The fourth line is a beautiful transition to just floating. I wish I could write like this.

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