All Comments on 'Blue Dress'

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KOLKOREKOLKOREabout 16 years ago
A magic costume

Your magic costume has done its mission, your magic costume can now be gone!

WickedEveWickedEveabout 16 years ago
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This poem is doing too much telling and not enough showing, though it does have potential. I like the image of the dress that you begin with, then you end with that same image of the dress now on the floor.

tazz317tazz317almost 12 years ago
CREASES AND SMEARS

the blue satin is on the way to the dry cleaner, TK U MLJ LV NV

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