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mentioned on literotica's poetry forum in the new poems review thread.

Stark images that are limned in truth. I enjoyed the slightly chaotic imagery, it disconnects us as if we, too, are watching the day unfold.

We're only given as much as we can carry before it all breaks loose in a spray of Uzi bullets. It's up to those of us with space in our arms to help bear the burdens of others. Sometimes, "I love you" gives the weary permission to set it all down for a little while.

Thanks for the poemie.

Quite an explosive combination of pain, suffering, love, and passion wrapped up in this.

Sounds like it's only your love that keeps her going