All Comments on 'Anything for a Friend'

sorry excuse for a man.

The addition of the wife and her anal play was jarring and destroyed the story.

Hey I loved it ..... I would love my husband to let me take his arse .... he loves to take mine as he plays with my clit, but he won't let me return the favour ... sitting here and gushing

The basic idea of a wife asking her husband to have sex with another woman is very hot and it was a nice touch to have the man masturbate so it's more believeable later when he can hold off ejaculating. The pacing of the story is good, but some proofreading would help. First, the word "your" is used where "you're" is meant, some words are repeated a little too frequently and too closely together, and so on. Most jarring, however, is the shift in tense. It's ok for the asides about Nicole's apperance and habits to be in present tense, but the action in the sex scene should all be in past tense, like the rest of the story. I didn't find the strap-on aspect as jarring as a previous reviewer, but it would be better if Nicole saved her participation for round two.

wonderful fantasy — the strapon element was tastefully done without become obsessive.