All Comments on 'What Big Sister Wants Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Best Incest story

You have out done yourself. This story was great, how a families love was taken to a higher level. Not for power, but for love of one another.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Loving family

Wonderful series.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Amazing

One of the best multi-chapter stories I have read. The lack of power or domination over each other and more about the love put this over the top.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
grate ending

i hope you do come back to this stroie and tell of the other sister

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Awsome

AWSOME STORY!!!!!!!!!! LOVED IT!!!! Look forward to mor from you

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
need part 4

Great story loved it, need to intro and bring younger sister in on the fun definitely can't wait to read about her schock an not only what is going on but her reaction to brother huge cock especially when she fucks him for 1st time. God huge cock and youthful stamina. the boy or young man having time of his life. what I would give to be 20 years younger with exception of keeping the confidence it took me so long to gain with women and all the fun that I could have been having at least at earlier age. who knows I might of seduce my mother and sisters

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Reviews

The story was ok, but why do you post reviews by people that can not spell?

DWhiteDWhiteover 15 years ago
Another Great one!!

You've done it again!! Another great story!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Great Story aven after 3 readings.

It's time to continue this saga with Karen!!

LitaholicLitaholicabout 14 years ago
Very enjoyable

I felt that it was an excellent short story and I hope that if you haven't already written a sequal that you soon will.

woody1441woody1441over 13 years ago
Great story as always

Loved the concept but still waiting for the final chapter with Karen. These stories are two years old now, is it going to happen?

joep01joep01about 13 years ago
Another great story

I have to agree we need one more chapter!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago

These stories are awesome. I'd love to read the final chapter with Karen. Please write it!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

Very hot story. Definitely could use a follow up chapter to complete the family circle. Megan and Danny would be a great tag team to seduce Karen into the fold.

jaqvertjaqvertover 12 years ago
your earlier story

I can tell this is one of your earlier stories without even checking the dates. Your earlier work is fun and full young males' porn fantasy filled scenes.

Your later work has more build ups and you spend more time in developing the characters.

Although not as sophisticated as your later creations, the earlier stories are still good and fun-filled and still a great read.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Stupid

You should have stopped at the previous chapter. This was simply plain stupid.

reader018reader018over 12 years ago
dont listen to the anonymous ass!

I think it was a great ch. to add! Would like to see more of this story,excellent job!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Danny's pussy

Great story. I got confused when on page four Danny suddenly grew a pussy.

redskinsfan6969redskinsfan6969over 12 years ago
very nice story

would love to read more on what happens the summer when Karen comes home one leave and what she says/does

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
I know its an old story...

but please continue. I feel like Karen has to be included or she should not have been mentioned in the story to start with. So far everything I've read of yours is great, the new Naughty Family brought me back to this classic. Please continue both.

Lancelot55Lancelot55about 12 years ago
When does Karen's Leave Begin??

It has been since 3/3/08 that Megan and her brother Danny and mom and dad discovered the joys of each other!! Middle sister Karen was due to return on leave from the Air Force for a fun filled family summer on the Gulf coast. Something happen and she didn't get leave!!!? I am editing my favorites and three years is a long time to wait. Do I wait a SHORT while more or do I dump What Big Sister Wants from my favorites

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
OH WOW

Please please please please please make a sequel Karen sounds like such a hot hot name, and i would love to see where this goes next

parputter69parputter69almost 12 years ago
Also, waiting for Karen.

Just started reading most of your stories and enjoy them very much. Hope you will sometime do a fourth chapter bringing Karen into the fold. That would be the proper way to finish off this series.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Pretty Please

Please continue to write more for many years to come!!!! Loved it!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Karen

Please get the next sequel started as soon as possible, cannot wait for Karen to join

the fun, especially with her hot pussy sister and her big cock brother.

Riverwolf0222Riverwolf0222about 11 years ago
Wonderful

I liked this one a lot! I too would like to see at least one more chapter. To find out what happens when Karen is home.

BfreetorunBfreetorunalmost 11 years ago
As always, a hot story.

I have read nearly all of your distant works, not many of the more recent ones. I will go to your page and check them out. Thank you for writing.

ArmphidArmphidalmost 11 years ago
Inclusion brings it home

This whole series has been excellent and this chapter was the apex of it for me. The fact that, unlike most incest stories, the whole family is involved and happy is what really makes it. It's a rare thing to see and I enjoyed it immensely. Thank you for continuing to write!

ChrsinnTXChrsinnTXalmost 11 years ago
yum so creamy hot

I just found this series. Oh how hot! I know it's been years since you wrote this, but I'd really love to see & play to the next chapter with sister Karen.

ABQDUDEABQDUDEover 10 years ago
finally

Some anal, I loved this chapter. Have loved both giving and receiving anal. I had a g/f who did not want to go there, one time when we were on a double date that ended up in a swap fest I tried to get her to give me her ass, she said that if I wanted to do her ass I needed to show her that it didn't hurt. I ask my buddy if he would fuck my ass? and he said he wanted to fuck his g/f in the ass as well. so he did me then I did him while the girls watched. lets just say we both got the girls from then on.

SyrustheVirusSyrustheVirusabout 10 years ago

This was amazing!!!! Please give us chapter 4!!!!

jtw0978jtw0978over 9 years ago
nice

But you must write about the sister getting involved, and since your the big sister it should be easy

MR0ROMANTICMR0ROMANTICover 9 years ago
more

Please bring chapter 4

Leotardstights69Leotardstights69over 8 years ago

Great story love mother/son and sister/brother incest father and daughter not so much

Turtle1952Turtle1952about 7 years ago
fantastic

loved it, all of it. Please can we read about Karen joining in maybe?

horny2doithorny2doitalmost 7 years ago

I am so glad I found this story again and read part 2 and 3 ... so damn hot and just keeps on going !! Yes, now you need to write about Karen who should enter this whole series of events. Maybe Megan can bring her up to date or Mom; but she should first experience her baby brother and his super sized cock. That should peak her interest and take it from there when Mom tells her more. Hope its very soon ...... thanks.

dannyboy66109dannyboy66109over 6 years ago

Now that I have read all 3 parts, loved them all, how things progressed, and played out for the 4 of them. I find myself wanting more, I would love to see an addition that brings Karen into the action of the love filled family.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
More

how about mom and sis in a 69 while dad and take turns fucking them and rotating between their pussies

dikupinyadikupinyaalmost 5 years ago
wow

i can't wait for Karen

HragsHragsabout 4 years ago
5 star. But really a 10 *

I meant to hit 5*. Great story. Look forward to more chapters.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
Record

Did this chapter set a record for the most times the word daddy was used?

We get it he is her father!

HotRodLincoln69HotRodLincoln69about 3 years ago
MORE PLEASE!!!!

I would love to see how they seduce Karen and how the family comes together!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

I liked it

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Well done

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

We all know these are total fake but wouldn't it be nice to at least not be so totally absurdity inconceivable.

PlaytimeXXXPlaytimeXXXover 1 year ago

Great build up; what father or man could resist her? or the permutations that follow!

masterguns77masterguns77about 1 year ago

Perfect amount of plot and erotica action.

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