All Comments on 'The Show Must Go On Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Good follow up to part 1!

Please write some more. It got me hot but not quite there...

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Five stars

Love the gentle build up in this tale of self-discovery. Please write more - I want to know what happened next!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
More

Please continue I would like to follow Kate for a few more chapters. Hot stuff.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Excellent!!!!

Very nice. More please!

Love the shy blossoming wife.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Neat. I want more

Would like to hear more about Kate. Is she based on a real person?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
I Loved It...

... especially that moment when Kate moved her legs "slightly" apart. More please!

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