All Comments on 'Living Heart Ch. 01'

A very dark, tantalising introduction. The portrayal of the vampire was nicely done, sensual and sensitive but with enough danger to keep her interesting. I would have preferred to know more about the other woman but I suppose it is early. I will certainly keep an eye out for the second instalment. I hope it arrives soon.

Very good first chapter, I wait with anticipation for the remaining ones. Even though i know that they are just as good. Good job and i can not wait to edit more