All Comments on 'The Game'

of this particular note in history. It creates a really clear sense of time and place. I love the wordplay on William Tell.

Your poem has been recommended in the New Poem Reviews thread on Literotica's Poetry Feedback and Discussion forum. Thanks for the read!

Imagine the guilt, and you do. Wonderfully.

Very nicely done.

"And so in that chemical daze he wrote/forever trying to remember to forget a day" those lines epitomize the tenet of the poem which stirs your guts and moves you at once, as you try to absorb the nauseating realization of a senseless death.