by lustfuldesires
who i'd rather like to be more!
that was really sexy! i love the idea. i would have loved a little more build up and detail, but i will be rubbing my pussy all night thinking about that! good job!
great story...a lot of tension and build up. a little disappointed with the abrupt ending, but I was looking for much more pee play than that. after sumitting this reply, im gonna search for a prt II of this story, in hopes that someone is gonna drink that glass of hot piss before it gets cold!
Pray for rain!
-- peebudy
liked your story, but ended much too soon. Would like to more done to Amanda including more pee action. Maybe even a reversal of rolls.
I ill for a continuation, hopefully you will Write one.