All Comments on 'Beast takes a Beauty Ch. 01'

that is so not fair top leave it hanging there you better be writing a load more chapters to make up for it. ;·)

This is great so far! I sure hope there's more on the way!

please let there be more...other wise my life will be unfulfilled

continue with this story. It is really good so far, and i can see the potential. I am dieing to know what happens next.

I'm not usually one for ruffness but baby! Please continue and I hope it has a good ending seeing how he is taking her virginity and he doesn't believe in mating? He should either stop when he finds out she is a virgin or find out she is his destined mate! Thanks and gl writing this one!

Ow ow! Man, I got hot reading this. Now my roommate is all akward and I need to excuse myself to go shower.

Damn. that's hot. I want more.

Original! Keep writing!

I really liked this story!....untill it got all rapey. dont make it rapey....

The rest??