I'm not usually one for ruffness but baby! Please continue and I hope it has a good ending seeing how he is taking her virginity and he doesn't believe in mating? He should either stop when he finds out she is a virgin or find out she is his destined mate! Thanks and gl writing this one!
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Anonymous08/28/08
Man, that's good.
Ow ow! Man, I got hot reading this. Now my roommate is all akward and I need to excuse myself to go shower.
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not fair
that is so not fair top leave it hanging there you better be writing a load more chapters to make up for it. ;·)
is there more to cum????
This is great so far! I sure hope there's more on the way!
please...
please let there be more...other wise my life will be unfulfilled
Yes, please
continue with this story. It is really good so far, and i can see the potential. I am dieing to know what happens next.
dang!
I'm not usually one for ruffness but baby! Please continue and I hope it has a good ending seeing how he is taking her virginity and he doesn't believe in mating? He should either stop when he finds out she is a virgin or find out she is his destined mate! Thanks and gl writing this one!
Man, that's good.
Ow ow! Man, I got hot reading this. Now my roommate is all akward and I need to excuse myself to go shower.
Damn. that's hot. I want more.
ohhh!
Original! Keep writing!
still interested
I really liked this story!....untill it got all rapey. dont make it rapey....
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