All Comments on 'A Little Incest'

CRAP !

BULLSHIT.

This story is out of state, out of country, out of mind and out of control.... As you Brits say, "Not my cup of tea".

Weird. It has no defining sense of direction and is very jerky. I think you could develop into a good writer, but need to put more work into it.

nothing but rape it never should have been submitted or posted

Rape is not erotic, it is criminal and this is not the type story that should ever be posted.

CRAP CRAP CRAP CRAP CRAP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

keep you day job and do me a favor and stop writing you almost killed my eyeballs you . THAT IS CALLED RRRAAAPPPEEE!!!! RAPE!!

Your story is a complete mess.You couldn't execute it well enough.It really SUCKED.My rating for this story would be 1 out of 10.And yeah,don't bother me and the other readers who are looking for sensual and erotic content and not your childish imagination.

Simply pathetic! please kill yourself.

hot!

really good