All Comments on 'Beast takes a Beauty Ch. 03'

I loved the beginning because it felt more real then lovey Dovey but I like how you are transforming this story now for the romance we all know and love.

I hope this is not the end. Please continue and update soon.

better now. I didn't really care for the non-consent part. And Ben should really be gentler now since she is pregnant. Please update soon!

I'm pretty sure he called her "my bitch," as in maybe "my woman" but for those of the canine persuasion... I liked the story! Don't stop now!

It moves kind of fast but other than that its pretty good though I agree the "my bitch" part is a little wierd but so is BDSM nonconsent or things like pony play as long as she likes it then there isnt' a problem.

Can't wait to see more!

I don't see how he can love her and still abuse her physically like that...but I think the story is good, thought it moves a bit too fast for my taste. Looking forward to the next chapter.

I swear. Each time i read your chapter, it just gets better and better. This is a great story so far, and i really cant wait till i get to read more. I NEED to know what happens next. Please hurry, and continue.

Can't wait for the next chapter!!!

I love this story and I would love to see more. You are one of the best.

I love a good werewolf story and this is one of the best that I have ever read. I didn't like the rape part but the rest of it was very good and an enjoyable read. I'm looking forward for the next chapter.. Wolfmann

I hate that he raped her. I don't get how he goes from raping her and slapping her to all of a sudden being all tender. It makes no sense. Also, why would she suddenly be like 'ok lets go make a home together and have our baby and raise him together. Oh and lets make love right away too.'

and she loved tristan so much that she didn't leave a note or say goodbye or anything? Real nice of her. It just seems a bit contrived. It would have worked better if he had to work to get her to accept him. If she had to go at least leave a note for Tristan saying something. Some excuse. Not leave him thinking she left him or was kidnapped.

I liked this story so much but, I have to agree with the first comment...You should have EASED into this better with maybe longer chapters? It would have been more understanding if Ben had to work his way into her heart first, instead of kidnapping her. It's odd that she just gives in, with no insight into if she even feels for him up until that point.

This is a good story but I don't like the rape part and how he treats her I also think that things were a little rushed and should have taken more time to build I would have liked it better if he wasn't such an asshole and not be so commanding and rough with her especially now that she is pregnant and I find it very odd that one minute she hates him and the next she seems to just forget what he has done to her and seems to forgive him so easily but in actuality I think this is an overall good story

How does someone get attacked by rapists twice in a matter of days!?!

Disgusting how he raped her and hits her and now they're gonna fall in love. There's nothing hot about it.