All Comments on 'Rainy Friday'

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litchipkinglitchipkingabout 16 years ago
You "tickled" my heart

It’s on days like these - When I no longer need to wonder - if I am the only one who feels that longing, - The ache that only her touch can soothe. Thank you for putting it to words. Beautiful. - Chip

bluebellbluebellabout 16 years ago
Do I even need to say...

Just how lovely this is coming from you? It IS lovely, dearest friend. Just, heartfelt and present and glowing with tendons of strength and the ache of knowing Alone.

Brute_ForceBrute_Forceabout 16 years ago
Bravisima!

The poem is utterly beautiful, rich with feelings of desire and love lost in the rain, remembered and eroticized. C'est jolie.

jomarjomarabout 16 years ago
I can feel

the ache. I like the sameness yet differences in the stanzas. Heartfelt and intimate. Very touching. Well done!

KingCuddleKingCuddleabout 7 years ago
I'm on my way! :+))

Got hot cocoa? :+))

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