All Comments on 'Gran's Story'

Pleased to read you will be writing more. This was good but ended too abruptly just as it was starting to get going. I hope the grandson gets to incestuously fuck his grandma in the next chapter.

I have looked at your other stories and I know you are interested in mother/son incest.There is nothing wrong with that.As far as this story is concerned, I would suggest you take the plunge and write a story with plenty of loving incest sex.Women seem to be very good at writing incest stories,I suppose its the Jocasta complex coming out,also whether they admit it or not most mothers are very possessive where thir sons are concerned,especially if he happens to be an only child.

Some thought went into this story, I wonder how much of

the story is true. I found the story moving!.

Keep it UP !..

loved it ,just as it started to get good you stop. write some more. so i can finish dream it's me and my grandma and anut

This goes from an 18 year old knowing nothing about sex, except what he read/saw in a magazine to eating his grandmother to climax in "sixty seconds or less"?

yeah, rriiiiiigggght!

Very nice story, I enjoyed it but the boy should be like 15 or 16 because most 18 year old would stay on their own.

A little unrealistic on the premise, but now that you have them together, I hope you will tell us more.

That to write about a subject you need two things,a certain amount of knowledge of the subject matter and secondly to be able to think what will appeal to the reader.You have put a lot of thought into this but stop holding back ,let yourself go a write what you really feel

Oddly enough, the mental image I had, as I spanked and read, was not much different from the author's picture. Some cleavage would be nice, perhaps full topless!

I liked the story a lot, and really look forward to Aunt Fran getting some cock, as well as an FMF for the young man.

Get you going Jena,imagine its YOU instead of "Gran",bring in aunt and away you go with a sexual incestuous love in.

What a nice story! Deserves a sequel and I look forward to more adventures of this boy and his sexy granny. Gran made a good start on their affair and there should be plenty more to come--or cum.

Like many writers on Literotica you apparently don't know the difference between a noun and a verb.

"Cum" is a noun that refers to semen.

"Cumming" as a word does not exist. The correct word is the verb "To come" (Coming), in this case referring to an orgasm.

The story has a reasonable basic idea, but lacks any sublty in the telling.

A GOOD INCEST STORY ABOUT A TEENAGER AND HIS GRAN,IT GOT ME CUMMMING,IT`S A SEXY WORD USED IN A SEXY EROTIC STORY---OBVIOUSLY ANONYMOUS IN U.S.A.IS NOT SEXY---I AM AND I THOROUGHLY ENJOYED THE STORY--MORE PLEASE

How about you writing a better story - "Cumming" is used in a lot of erotic writing.

HOW ABOUT YOU TRY AND WRITE A BETTER STORY - "CUMMING" IS A WORK THAT IS USED IN MOST EROTIC STORIES - IF YOU READ ANY OF THEM IN THIS PUBLICATION YOU WILL SEE THAT. IT IS USED AS MORE OF AN EXPRESSION OF FEELING. THANK YOU - JENA121

As a matter of fact I was DUX of the class for three years in English - so I think I know my nouns etc.

To Bamadude55 - maybe the boy is only 15/16 - unfortunately I have to say 18 as that is the legal age allowed on this site - just let your immagination run wild - Jena121

Poor sole in USA. does he know if hes cuming or going. Keep up the good work. I,m cumming

I'm particularly fond of stories about older women, and this is one of the best. "Gram" was real...knew what she wanted, and confident she would get it. My kind of gal.

I really like stories about older women, especially grandmothers. This is one of the best. Great work Dee. Keep it up. Sure kept me up ... if you know what I mean.

hmmm love older younger stories.

Love to have gran come to my room.. wouldlick and suck her before sliding inside her sweet pussy

I have akways loved older ladies

and I am glad they are not bashfull

about having their needs met.

This is a truley delightfull story about a

young man and his granny and I really

enjoyed reading it and look forward to

her Gran's story Ch 2,3and 4

Thanks Jena You are a "Sweetie'

lusty and brief. Well written, almost believable.

its a good story, having read all the chapters but the whole grandmother missing the long dead grandfather thing is done to death

Love Grandma stories

Please continue......we all want to hear how things progress.....hurry, I'm hard waiting !!!!

I'm older but no less horny. It's in my genes! My whole family was insanely horny and we all had to learn to deal with the repercussions over the years. I actually experienced things like this, and though Jenna didn't develop the characters too much, this story could use some of that. It could have ended on a much higher note too. I think I will write my own; after all, it really did happen.

I just loved it, warm, loving, he was legal she was too, way legal! It just shows that getting older

does not mean one has to miss out on bIG things. Thanks Jena!

Write more please loved it.

Waiting on more with granny and aunt

Sexy, seductive story that reminds me of the afternoon my aunt( aunt in law, the wife of an uncle) and I went from teasing to touching in her kitchen only to be interrupted when the phone rang. Never happened again, but it was unforgettable.