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AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Unique

Never quite heard one along these lines. Great revenge story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Nice work, but.......

It's a great story line. But please, improve the writing. ("loose" vs "lose"; "there" vs "their"; and champagne!!!) Buy a dictionary, and use it! I don't have to read things out loud, I don't even have to move my lips when reading! And words have meanings! Make correct choices, and avoid having readers need to pause to make sense of what you have written. It's a nicely done plot, and otherwise well written. Fix these errors, and keep that imagination running.

-- KK in Texas

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
pretty good

***

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Melodramatic in the extreme

<p>This kind of story, told in such a melodramatic style and with such an over the top revenge aspect, is no better than the horrible cuckold stories that share this site.</p>

<p>The whole story lacked HEART and passion. How can a story of infidelity and seduction be so devoid of emotion? For example, the exchange between the husband and wife was not just minimal, it was totally unbelievable. There is no emotion, no outrage, no remorse...nothing. If Sherrie were SO EASILY seduced by this doctor then she was worthless too.</p>

<p>I was very disappointed with the entire tale. It was difficult to read it through to the end.</p>

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Nice one ('scuse the pun)

Thoroughly original and a tad macabre, but good imagination. Loved the camaraderie amongst the wronged co-conspirators.

I like your stories.

Thank you for your time and effort.

By the way, please ignore detractors' comments - this is all imagination and you are perfectly right to present your creations as you wish.

Please keep up the good work.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Two people can keep a secret if one is dead

Silly story with several gaping holes. And, by the way, the drink is Champagne. The city is Champaign.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Unbelievable

Good tale of revenge, but completely unbelievable. A fair read though. A change from some of the other revenge stories

bruce22bruce22about 16 years ago
Enjoyable

as long as you don pick at it. What would be

was kind of obvious from the beginning. Better than a lot of

things but nothing exciting. I least no wimps appeared in

the story or is someone going to demand a big punishment for

Sherrie?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Stupidity UNreal Doc

So we have a plastic surgeon in Harold who can like all reconstructive surgeries simply create a new cock in sex change operations, but that never comes to mind of the Real Doc, no more than minimal bleeding when you cut off a wanker is impossible. Most people bleed to death and if you don't know that ask the torture victims of Vietnamese Cong.

This was outlandishly stupid in scope and making a slut wife a victim. Doc Harold banged her he said repeatedly, so I guess the other times were just rapes too by the willing.

As a cop always knows, stories always unravel and that many whiners being mounted by a cock would have sung and you would be in prison and the slut would be mounting some suit lawyer trying to get you off.

What an utter disappointment this was.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Ahhh Leave The Man Some Latitude - Nice Work

So what - this was far better than most and had the consequential appeal of justice missing in so many others.<P>

Author, I like your imagination and subject which manages a usually fair ending - thusly satisfies more than many. Just continue the challenging effort to grow<P>

I look forward to your next tale of imaginative consequence.<P>

With High Regard

roadbirdroadbirdabout 16 years ago
i cant

understand why harold didnt just become a woman ...then he could have fucked the hubbys of all the women he fucked ...he could have had a lifetime of then just being fucked instead of fucking.....oh well maybe the doc is right he did learn to like it up the ass instead

KOLKOREKOLKOREabout 16 years ago
misguided venting by a wimpish husband

The sacrificial penis was indeed sacrificed in a surreal session (how did they get rid of the...never mind!). It was done to erase the sins of all the cheaters with bad concisions and for the benefit of the soft hearted and mind husband. Sorry, but the effeminate character of the husband could not convince me with his wimpish approach to his cheating and lying Sherrie (until it became virtually impossible to continue with the lying). The whole story looks like one bog exercise in self distraction and avoidance. Instead of dealing with their real problem, namely –why did Dear Sherrie cheat on him to begin with, or how come the husband’s mind accepts dear Sherrie’s terrible excuse (if dear Sherrie should be held from behind by a horny and persistent male she too would becomes horny, and simply has to succumb) as a reasonable explanation. Instead of dealing with THOSE troubling issues (BTW, he should have thanked Mr. wandering penis. for the voluntary disclosure or else dear Sherrie would have never come forth with the truth), he decides to deal only with the seducer despite the fact that this admittedly obnoxious person, was not the one who was married to him and therefore was not the one who cheated on him. As far as remeeber it was a consensual sex. Sure hw he was a creep, who deserved to loose his license and some teeth be but he never vowed to stay loyal to the husband. Talk about misguided venting by basically a deeply wimpish husband.

Alvaron53Alvaron53about 16 years ago
Skip this tale unless you're into weird fantasies

Stilted dialogue, sadism, mutilation, and stupidity do not make for an erotic story. As a work of fiction, this was about as interesting as watching chainsaw fighting. No cookie for you.

zed0zed0about 16 years ago
Wimp!

I hope the slut wife rots in hell!

H.H.MorantH.H.Morantabout 16 years ago
One billion wasted electrons

The comments by KOKALE (or something close to that) were right on - as were those by the others who gave this a 0 Anybody who thinks this story was erotic, or had any merit whatever, has serious problems

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
A "fun tale" - but it takes two to tangle.

Mr. Perfect got what he deserved but the slut wife got away with the betrayal with some simple tears. Good thing it is all just plain fantasy. Thanks for your efforts, author.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
A very enjoyable story of a man who deserved what

he got. I dont like the notion of portraying the various cheating wives as victims of a seducer. To be seduced a woman has to want sex, sex with her seducer. That isnt rape, it isnt against the womans will. It is voluntary adultry and cheating on her marriage. He didnt take them out and drug them, nor use force nor blackmail. The author presents all of the women as victims, they werent they were coconspirators in a cheating sexual affair. And in the case of the OR nurse done at work while on duty. Had she really felt wronged, she could have filed a major sexual complaint on him, and the hospital would have had to pay her a large amount of money. Problem was she wasnt wronged she chose to have the sexual act at work. She was so much into it she did not tell her husband and tried to act as if she loved just him, and was always faithful. I really wonder of a woman who has so little sexual control that if they are aroused they have to have sex right then. This woman came into a marriage at about 22 years old a virgin, with this problem? Like did she never date and get sexuall aroused? The fictional aspect of the story is very nice but the realistic scene just does not wash. Personally I would have walked away from my wife had she done this knowing she was going to cheat again and again and actually had no remorse for it until she was found out. Once a cheater always a cheater. It is a personality mindset not a spontaneous decision.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
married writers?

Every married man knows a woman knows how to say NO, if she wants to. I wonder how many of these male writers were ever married? Not many, if any, cause I never heard one of these wronged husbands ever say, "You know how to say NO to me." This seduced bs is just that, bs.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
married writers?

Every married man knows a woman knows how to say NO, if she wants to. I wonder how many of these male writers were ever married? Not many, if any, cause I never heard one of these wronged husbands ever say, "You know how to say NO to me." This seduced bs is just that, bs.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
I enjoyed the story, it was well written.

Having said that the good nurse deserved to be divorced! She was not forced into sex, she did not really object to sex, she did not call out for help, and she did not file charges. Putt another way she was a willign accomplice in her seduction and it is only her word that the seducer only used her once. He adter all had claimed several times. She lied and hid it from her husband, something no true loving spouse would have done. All told she should have been one more case of worthless trash that had thrown her own life away for lust. How can you live with and trust a woman who respects and humiliates you in such manner. She was a nurse and didnt even go get tested after but kept having sex with her husband. Yep a real special love going on there.

jackiedanielsjackiedanielsover 15 years ago
justice is served

He got exactly what he deserved,it is one thing to set you,re goal to seduce every married woman you can ,but quite abother to go around rubbing it in everyones face and bragging about it,for all you guys out there with this fantasy be very careful,some husbands are not wimps

RonRWoodRonRWoodover 14 years ago
Good Story...

Pay no attention to the lonely women haters... This was a good revenge story. Anyone that takes pride in ruining other peoples marriages deserves this. Marriages should be respected and married people left alone. All sexual predators should always be isolated, encarcerated, killed, or as in this case just operated on. I liked it...

zed0zed0about 14 years ago
Wimp!

He may have castrated the ass hole, but stayed married to a cheating whore. What a Looser!

oldwayneoldwaynealmost 14 years ago
I hope it really happened.

The bastard got his just desserts. Thanks for the story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Surprise, Surprise

At least they were all civil about it. Alas, poor Harold...not

TavadelphinTavadelphinabout 13 years ago
Holy crap Doc

First - "Do no harm"

I am not sure if you did or did not honor that pledge in this one -

No argument you got yours and they got theirs - and dickhead got his.

I do enjoy the idea though - and even after over 30 years in healthcare I can see the plot develop right up to the execution moment - that last step is a LONG one though.

Scorpio44Scorpio44about 13 years ago
Justice!

A previous comment quoted, "First, do no harm." Who did the harm? Dr. I-used-to have a dick. The victims simply stopped him from harming others.

Simple and effective justice.

Well done.

DWornockDWornockover 12 years ago
3***

It is an okay story but not realistic since that many people could never keep a secret.

Besides it is natural for women, married and single, to fuck extra good looking men. It is natural selection where women when ovoluting select the best available genes for their eggs and climax with the better man but not climax with her mate.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Clever, but empty

Opinions will differ, but I didn't think this story added up to much. You created and then destroyed a straw man--the story is not much more than that.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
One star

As Harold is sure you did it what would stop him from getting revenge on you, absolutely nothing in about a couple of years you would come home to find your slut wife and children murdered and it would all be your fault.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
i know its bad.....bill

but revenge can be so much funn....lol

betrayedbylovebetrayedbylovealmost 12 years ago
Oh Well

So McQueen became a no-dick mother fucker. Just a minor chuckle. I guess you had to be there.

HA

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Real Doc?

More like real wimp. 1*

lonewolf3307lonewolf3307over 10 years ago
Cut his dick off?...

... Ouch, now that's what I call some real revenge. Great story, well done.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
the unkindest cut of all....

A perfect solution to a perfect asshole. Oops, probably NOT so perfect after switching teams. heh heh heh

rightbankrightbankabout 10 years ago
reality check needed

In the time of pagers and home landlines Ecstasy had not yet been formulated.

tazz317tazz317about 10 years ago
WHEN MORE THAN ONE PERSON KNOWS

its not a secret, but a consensual conspiracy. TK U MLJ LV NV

phil2213phil2213about 10 years ago
Seriously?? Wow! Now that's as cold as it can get.

Although, it can be sweet to have a good revenge; this was quite fantastic. We've encounter people that can take you out of your normal sense of composure. Thank God not too frequently for me, at least. The characters were well developed and easily read. I would've preferred more detail on Sherrie, just out of curiosity. I felt you fulfilled your obligation to this story with great skill and patience. I enjoyed the story in spite of its predictability. Thank you for a great effort!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Reality indeed "Rightback

Ecstasy first appeared on streets about 1980, pagers arrived about 1990, so there's nothing wrong with this timeline

Pappy7Pappy7over 9 years ago
If she had no more control over herself than that

then he needed to get a DNA test on the kids and a psych check on himself. Why in the world do women in these stories allow themselves and some times even take the lead in cheating and immediately begin to hate the one they got caught with? Why would a husband forgive his wife because he realized that the other man was just so much better looking and hunky than he was? Wife knew what he looked like when she married him. If she wasn't satisfied with his looks she shouldn't have married him in the first place. To my way of thinking the most grievous wrong was on the part of the wife. She was the one who vowed to remain faithful and not just until something better came along. She, by the actions of hubby in this story, should have had her vagina sewn shut allowing urination and that's all.

Cuck-a-doodle-do And by the way, forgiving this kind of betrayal doesn't make the victim seem stronger, but it does make the slut stronger and gives her the upper hand in the marriage.

Winter2011Winter2011over 9 years ago
Timeline is wrong

Ecstasy is in the 1980's herpes has been tested / diagnosed acuratly since the 1970's he says this was before HIV and herpes while the HIV could work herpes could not so no the timeline is fucked

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Simpleminded drivel ! 1*!

pre-frontal lobotomy is indicated !

bonnietaylor2bonnietaylor2over 8 years ago
splended story gave you a 5

Love the idea in this LW story, good read. Fuck anony that asshole hates everything

gatorhermitgatorhermitabout 8 years ago
Dark revenge story, but...

Somehow it was almost poetic and borderline funny. The comments are interesting as well. DW noted that people are unlikely to be able to keep the secret - he does have a good point. Not sure why some folks hated the story - dark but poetic in a way.

rightbankrightbankabout 8 years ago
If THE Dr. was as gifted a plastic surgeon as we are told

He would not have remained a stubby for long. I fear he may have used the birthday party gift as a reason to enhance his meager remainders with some reconstructive creativity.

What about Sensation? Feeling? you ask? He didn't have those before the surgery.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
i achieved something similar during my school years.

Sunny Khiani was his name, 'the malaysian pig' we would tease him behind him, He was a Bully, it was a private school so when i would come back from holidays, he would come sniffin for the stuff i brought back,Naturally i planned to masturbate inside a few sandwiches, so i made a big show of opening the sandwiches when he came near my locker & i began eating the only sandwich without my special man 'sauce', he looked at me & did not even bother with asking, just grabbed them all & went had it with his other bully friends, i waited patiently for a year, till the end of the school. on the last day in front of all the boys of my class & most of the others, i revealed my dastardly secret of the creamy sandwiches to him & his other friends.

oh my god, that was the day i learnt the value of patience, the look of horror on his face, while everybody began laughing, he suddenly began come out of the shock & rushed to punch me but was held back by his friends as there were too many in my side.

my things were all loaded & packed i just opened the car door & drove off, having had the best day of my life till then.

sbrooks103sbrooks103almost 8 years ago
Fair

I'm glad justice was served, but this line confused me:

"At least he learned how to take it up his ass."

Is this supposed to be taken literally? Because nothing was said in the story.

sbrooks103sbrooks103almost 8 years ago
Further Thought

As an Anon said, didn't any of these women learn the word "No"? I'm sure they've said it to their husbands often enough!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
What can we say?

Sherrie was a slut who didn't get punishment. Harry is able to talk his way into her panties in just 3 hours. That is a slut reaction. She knew what Harry was after as soon as he started talking to her. A chaise wife would have just kick Harry in the balls. This makes her husband a willing cuckold since he didn't want to punish his slut wife for fucking Harry! I have a feeling that this author is a closet cuckold!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
revenge

No amount of revenge can eliminate a cheating wife,s extra- marital sex. This tale shows how easily women can be persuaded to have sex anywhere and with any one. Wives should only enjoy sex with other men at the behest of their husbands or partners. Traddis

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Ah

Well the cuckold and his cuckolding wife can live happily till the next persuasive seducer comes along.

26thNC26thNCabout 5 years ago
Good revenge

Good work.On Dr McQueen. His shortcomings were greatly enhanced. Way too light on the wife. Should have been more repercussions.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Too Bad

This gets high marks because of the revenge. Unfortunately, the prose is often wooden; the martian slut ray cliche makes an appearance; the wife committed adultery and lied to her husband, yet gets off scot-free; and the husband is like the husbands in the author's other stories, essentially a cuck who, without any serious repentance by the cheating wife, will forgive her anything as long as she stops. The only thing that saves this from a 1 is the dickectomy at the end.

silentsoundsilentsoundalmost 5 years ago
Pretty bad.

Deranged fantasy.

cybojicybojiover 4 years ago
The punishment

Fit the crime. 5

Schwanze1Schwanze1over 4 years ago
Hmmm

Or you could just beat his ass like a rented mule and kick his nuts till he sings sorprano. Story is poor.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
cucks always get one star

fucking whore cheated, he shoulda dumped her ass

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
glad he cut off the dick.

Once the operation was done I would have dumped the cheating wife. She too easily gave in to the creep knowing full well his reputation.

26thNC26thNCalmost 4 years ago
Again

Good move leaving the balls. But would have been tortured for his entire life with unquenchable horniness. Good one.

traddisagaintraddisagainabout 3 years ago
'secret' rubbish

more unpleasantness. God help us, again.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Why didn't cuck boy dump the whore ?

WTF .

What a wimp

One star

JonDoe315JonDoe315over 2 years ago

Wow for forgiving his cheating wife

DrgwngDrgwngover 2 years ago

Still a cuck and still has a wife worthy of tossing to the curb. Despite all the real world cucky boys that wear the badge with honor, it is not something to aspire too.

WargamerWargamerabout 2 years ago

Hilarious but still a cuck tale. 2/5

JustOneMansOpinionJustOneMansOpinionabout 2 years ago

A fun whimsical tail, but obviously not a real doctor. A Urologist would know how to easily sever or damage the nerves that would cause him permanent ED. No erection, no fun. Just a drain hose for his bladder. He could also cause permanent incontinence. 4 stars only because it was funny.

Rancher46Rancher46about 2 years ago

What goes around comes around and Karma is a bitch 5 stars

AngelRiderAngelRiderabout 1 year ago

Wow, i actually found the most ridiculous and unbelievable story on this site. I have said that before but this one is really asinine. The only parts of this story that are even remotely plausible is the cheating and Dr McQueen (God knows I have seen the type).

Everyone present at the party has been harmed by the doctor. Those present are medical professionals. The wife of a urologist plied him with alcohol. A nurse anesthetist was present. Do you honestly believe the police wouldn't investigate? That the hospital wouldn't investigate? Get the fuck out. This is dumb as hell.

26thNC26thNCabout 1 year ago

The esteemed Angel’s scathing comment led me to read this again. It is a bit of outrageous revenge fantasy porn, but no less ridiculous than the majority of other stories on this site. We are insulted daily with ever more repulsive cuckold humiliation stories, frequently starring the stereotypical Jamal and white trash whore. Characters happily cheat, swing, swap, share, and indulge in all manner of perversion in 90% of the stories. I prefer the believable retribution in Hooked, Vande1, and other favorite authors, but OOT revenge from saddletramp, LT56, and a few others is always fun and refreshing to read. It’s all fantasy and forgotten 5 minutes after you read it.

Moonbat74Moonbat74about 1 year ago

Evidently most of the female workers at the hospital were rampant sluts to fall for the good Doctors bullshit.

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

Stupid as hell

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Your hero is a cuck pussy.

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