by manyeyedhydra
Ha, hah... priceless ending hahahah... The type of sex-heavy succubi story I always look for!
My first read of a succubus story. Very nicely done, carried me right through to the end!
Manyeyedhydra, you have yet to stop amazing me at how well you can write a succubus story. Great job with this one and I love the ending.
Manyeyedhydra once again you hit another one out of the park! Keep up the great story telling, Thanks.
I second the previous comment, the only thing that could have made this better would have been a "NOTE TO READER: turn on rock music then sit back and enjoy".
Great arousing story! Succubus rule! ;)
That was a riot! Funny, sexy and well-written. The last sentence made me snort my drink. Buffy fan I presume? If so *high-five*
Hmm, wonder if I can talk you into writing me some BtVS fan-fic. :D
I would have given you six, with one extra for the Buffy reference at the end! lol
ive read all of your succubi stories...
but this is the best...coz its rough and full of fights..and short..!!
just wish he cum when he first 'bang' the succubus on the wall...
that would be more erotic....
more short succubus stories please....with arrogant muscular sexy gladiatorial men..!!
Loved it. Always fun when some arrogant bastard is taken down a peg...
He'll be smarter next time... Oh wait, guess not :D
I love the ending... I knew he was gonna die... but which slayer in Sunnydale. There have been 3 (and 1/2 cause one was a robot).