All Comments on 'Slayer vs. Succubus'

by manyeyedhydra

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Lost_FreakLost_Freakabout 16 years ago
Priceless

Great story, the ending was priceless., Sunnydale, LAMO

xxxecilxxxecilabout 16 years ago
the type to look for

Ha, hah... priceless ending hahahah... The type of sex-heavy succubi story I always look for!

MikeyLoves269MikeyLoves269about 16 years ago
Very nice!

My first read of a succubus story. Very nicely done, carried me right through to the end!

mjm202036mjm202036about 16 years ago
Great story...again!

Manyeyedhydra, you have yet to stop amazing me at how well you can write a succubus story. Great job with this one and I love the ending.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Another hit!

Manyeyedhydra once again you hit another one out of the park! Keep up the great story telling, Thanks.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Sex and Fighting...

The only thing missing was some rock music...

DenkkarDenkkarover 15 years ago
Very badass

I second the previous comment, the only thing that could have made this better would have been a "NOTE TO READER: turn on rock music then sit back and enjoy".

AphroditesBelovedAphroditesBelovedover 15 years ago
I love Succubus! I love it when the win! hehe

Great arousing story! Succubus rule! ;)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Slayer vs Succubus

That was a riot! Funny, sexy and well-written. The last sentence made me snort my drink. Buffy fan I presume? If so *high-five*

Hmm, wonder if I can talk you into writing me some BtVS fan-fic. :D

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
pretty awesome

Awesome story. Good reference to Buffy too!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago

You just gotta root for the girl,haha! Good story!XD

zzzzz8xxxxx8zzzzz8xxxxx8about 11 years ago
Great

Another great succubus read, thank you

IronDragonIronDragonabout 11 years ago
I gave you 5 stars...

I would have given you six, with one extra for the Buffy reference at the end! lol

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
the best

ive read all of your succubi stories...

but this is the best...coz its rough and full of fights..and short..!!

just wish he cum when he first 'bang' the succubus on the wall...

that would be more erotic....

more short succubus stories please....with arrogant muscular sexy gladiatorial men..!!

TernomTernomabout 10 years ago

Loved it. Always fun when some arrogant bastard is taken down a peg...

He'll be smarter next time... Oh wait, guess not :D

GoddessAlishaGoddessAlishaover 6 years ago

I love the ending... I knew he was gonna die... but which slayer in Sunnydale. There have been 3 (and 1/2 cause one was a robot).

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