All Comments on 'More Than I Ever Wanted? Ch. 01'

by JamesTDH

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submissiveMan about 16 years ago

Good beginning

good start

Anonymousabout 16 years ago

Definite improvement

You can tell by my score

Anonymousabout 16 years ago

short

good start, although rather short.. I hope the next chapter is a little longer.. Keep going.

belted and teased about 16 years ago

Excellent beginning--a tease like your story!

A good beginning, leaving me looking forward to what cums next (or not), trying to ignore MY erection. I love a good, desperate tease...

freemic3040 over 14 years ago

Please...

Please write more to this story!! I loved the open to this story, but when you put ch.1, that means that there is gonna be at least a ch.2. The first chapter was short (but great) and I can't wait to read chapter 2. PLEASE WRITE SOME MORE TO THIS STORY!!!!

Anonymousalmost 11 years ago

Ahhhh

FINISH THE STORY! It started out amazingly

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