All Comments on 'The Toy'

Your stories are becoming more erotic, and more detailed. This is good, as it paints a better picture for your readers. Not to be too technical though, after all this was a good story.

This is an interesting contrast between reading your stories and seeing you in another setting one night a week.

Adding on to what I wrote on your 'Frustration' story, your slices of life make for a compelling read. Please keep them up! Oh, and thanx for the plug ;-)