All Comments on 'Lost My Virginity To My Sister'

You really should get an English speaking editor though as this story was a little hard to read at times, but as I said it was a pretty good story. Keep writing it will only get better.

Probably a decent enough story, but highly unreadable from a grammar/language standpoint. Sorry, but I couldn't get past the first paragraph, it was that rough.

nice story

Wtfh is akka lol learn to use english. Translate that comment ur sister said to you we speak mostly english not foreign language.

The story and narration are good. No need to translate the things to english, as it sucks all the enjoyments.