All Comments on 'Infidelity and Chastity Ch. 09'

A well written non violent story. Keep up the good work. It just goes to show that you don't have to mark to get your point across.

I liked, yeah, maybe probably loved, this entire series. I found it to be quite a gentle story, quite romantic and loving. I'm sure some would be offended by the dominant factor (sorry, don't go for the capital letter thing), but it really isn't about that. I admired the characterizations, the plot, the tension, the progression, the absence of physical violence and the resolution. I real treat. The only reason I didn't 5 star this is because of inconsistent spelling -- a personal fetish. Taut, as in stretched, is spelled t-a-u-t. It's not spelled taught, ot taunt. And while i'm not certain that appears in this story, I've seen it too many times in multiple others. This is an older story, but I notice a September 2012 story from this author also. I will be keeping a watch for rokcbohunk. Thanks for a great read! ...hcl

OK -- here I am criticizing spelling and misspell the author's name. It's "rockbohunk". And it wasn't an "I real treat"...it was: A real treat. So sorry...thanks...hcl

She would have left him in the beginning when he abused and humiliated her. In the end, she should have had him thrown in jail after that crap with Shannon. Your belief that she would take him back after all that is laughable.

Fantasy is limitless and possibilities are to.

How stupid, after having punished her for cheating for so long, at the end he introduces a third party that she will cheat with emotionally when she she is with him. She will think of her fantasy girl when she has sex with Rick.

What an idiot he is, he has made a rod for his own back.

He will regret his greed.

Excellent except for the end, 3/5