All Comments on 'Canoe Trip Gone Bad'

A good idea for a story, but you rushed it. Take more time with each girl. When the criminals swap, take more time with that event. The helicopter and the police could have arrived much later.

Like the comment above me said, it was too rushed, too work though, nice story line, nice action, but more detail would be very nice, i like how you put some background in the story. and the time for the rape was just right, but longer on the rape for each girl would of been better, keep trying! ^^

--Lya

Great Story idea! but like the last 2 comments, felt rushed and also not enough build up. Would love to see more detail and thought out story.