All Comments on 'Couples Dance and Swap'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
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Not badly written. But, to be honest, it would have to be a true story to be so nasty, so quickly. Otherwise, just a string of dirty words. Being told from the female point of view makes it even nastier. "Ladies" don't talk like that.haha My only complaint, not long enough for me to stroke my own hard cock and shoot an extra load of hot cum for the ladies to lick and suck up. Oh well, maybe your next story will get me off. Thanks. Richard

MarilynmwfMarilynmwfalmost 16 years ago
It's a tale that could be true--The sequence of

action was realistic however the narration was not well done, it was too much effort to kwwp track of who was doing what to who without a score card. The same exact story told better would be great

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Well Told

I liked your story and I hope you have more adventures to write about

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Could tell

Could tell you were aroused and confused since you couldn't remember whether you were married to David or Todd. But in the heat of passion one is as good as another...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
I loved it

Your story got this 66 year old cock hard. Thanks! Pieater

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Been There

and got the T shirt,also got the divorce papers,still c,est la vie.A great little story very erotic,defy anyone not to get turned on reading this.

RealDocRealDocalmost 16 years ago
very good but a little less believable

These couples needed to be true contortionists. A lot more dialogeu would strengthen these good stories. Please keep writting!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
hmmmm

Didn't get as wet as i would have liked to

alberto52alberto52over 13 years ago
OK, needs work.

Poor spelling throws me off, and lack of detail. But Iike the structure.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Good but too polite

You guys got into some nasty fucking but your language is oh so "There"ll always be an England." Cocks go into cunts, people grunt when they fuck, and they sometimes scream from getting carried away.

Hot people need to get hot. Good wanker story but could be even better.

Much love,

Your American Cousins

KalimaxosKalimaxosover 4 years ago
Nice

Nothing like a full swap couples story.

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