by shinheat
Not badly written. But, to be honest, it would have to be a true story to be so nasty, so quickly. Otherwise, just a string of dirty words. Being told from the female point of view makes it even nastier. "Ladies" don't talk like that.haha My only complaint, not long enough for me to stroke my own hard cock and shoot an extra load of hot cum for the ladies to lick and suck up. Oh well, maybe your next story will get me off. Thanks. Richard
action was realistic however the narration was not well done, it was too much effort to kwwp track of who was doing what to who without a score card. The same exact story told better would be great
I liked your story and I hope you have more adventures to write about
Could tell you were aroused and confused since you couldn't remember whether you were married to David or Todd. But in the heat of passion one is as good as another...
and got the T shirt,also got the divorce papers,still c,est la vie.A great little story very erotic,defy anyone not to get turned on reading this.
These couples needed to be true contortionists. A lot more dialogeu would strengthen these good stories. Please keep writting!!!!
Poor spelling throws me off, and lack of detail. But Iike the structure.
You guys got into some nasty fucking but your language is oh so "There"ll always be an England." Cocks go into cunts, people grunt when they fuck, and they sometimes scream from getting carried away.
Hot people need to get hot. Good wanker story but could be even better.
Much love,
Your American Cousins