All Comments on 'Eight Ball in Donna's Pocket'

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Anonymousabout 16 years ago

Destructive words destroy Creative Imagination

Being new to Literotica I must say that for various reasons this story left me speechless. I did read the whole story and I loved it. Amazingly, my IQ is above average. I read your story and found that in fact you were telling my story if I wrote one. I have not ever wrote a story on this site. I will never write one. Not because I would not want to but because I let some poor miserable people of my past crush my imagination with the grammar and spelling notion. Do not let them do this to you. Contrary to the critical minds of the "red pen" type....people who tend to lack structure in their writing often have a unique ability of opening up their stories to the readers as if they were there. After reading this story I looked over your profile, stories, and comments and felt compelled to say that I will look for your stories because you say what I would like to.You say what I have in the past. Do not let the super critical people take your creative unique style away. I usually stay in the back ground and had it not been the critical post in reply to your stories would I even speak now. I wish that I was able to write like I did at one time. So for now ....I will just read yours. This last one especially was nice. I am not all that big on sharing but the actions and background of the happenings I could relate to amazingly well. ..............."Substitute "damn" every time you're inclined to write "very"; your editor will delete it and the writing will be just as it should be." — Mark Twain

Anonymousabout 16 years ago

Loved it!

IQ? IQ has little to do with erotica and sexuality even if you take the writing and content into account. I think the IQ nerds below need to focus on an academic site rather than on Literotica, people might take more notice of their misguided comments there.