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You Can't Leave Me

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by Anonymous

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by Kinks8705/14/08

Good Read!

This was well constructed...I loved it! Keep up the good work!

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by Scorpio4405/14/08

Forceful! Demanding!

Just what she wanted him to do... And then...

Well written. I liked it. Keep writing.

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by Anonymous09/25/08

Not believable

I did not find the transition from being afraid and wanting to break up with him to wanting sex and a renewed relationship persuasive. It was not believable to me.

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by Anonymous11/11/08

Awesome.

Great story, and well-written.

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by Anonymous11/28/08

nice work

what a hot story. he really showed his girl who will be the man in their relationship.if more couples would accept their natural role,quit faking it,there'd be way less divorce,unhappiness and stupidness.can i read more about these two,or others like them?brooklynn

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by Anonymous02/22/09

My thoughts

First of all, the story is wonderfully well written and hot. Nice work.

But, to the small town guy who reviewed it: cut the BS about "natural roles". Yeah, us women have rape fantasies, but that doesn't mean what happened in this story could happen in real life. The whole relationship drama thing is not worked out in any real detail, because it's just an excuse to get to the hot sexual domination--it's about as real as your average Hollywood romantic comedy.

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by Tilona09/17/11

like it!

Nice story. I'm not a writer. But I love to read.

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by Anonymous04/22/13

And her answer?

Get the hell out of my way, you manipulative, abusive prick!

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by Anonymous06/01/13

Oooooo 5+ stars!

Although I didn't know details about Shauna or Josh, within one page I actually cared about them and found the story extremely erotic and sexy!

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by AMHJ8911/07/13

Ummm hot and at least he was polite at the end LOL

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