All Comments on 'Shelter in the Storm Ch. 05'

by KarennaC

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poupounepoupouneabout 16 years ago
1/4 of the chapter is just rehash!

You know, these chapters aren't more than a page long, and there aren't that many of them. You really don't need to spent the first 1/4 of each recapping.

dinkybootsdinkybootsalmost 12 years ago

agin with the boring sex.? tell me , are you a virgin by any chance talk about tame.?

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
shh

dinkyboots - it is fine to critique someone's work it is rude to criticize their work - you don't like it don't read it - but you read each chapter and harp on about how bad it is - after the first chapter why did you read any more.

I like the story - not so much the recap at the start of each chapter - but I didn't write it. The author wants to do it this way so be it.

Karenna - keep writing ignore the ass!

LavonyaLavonyaabout 11 years ago
I agree!

The one who wrote 'shh' is ABSOLUTELY right!!!

Gene63Gene63almost 11 years ago

The more I read, the more I dislike Shane. I know it takes two to tango, but my god!!! He doesn't hear a word Declan is saying and if Declan can't stand up for himself and gives in to what Shane wants, he deserves what he gets.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

BROKEN RECORD REPEATING EVERYTHING FUCKING THING ON EVERY CHAPTER IT IS BORING READING THE SAME SHIT TIME AFTER TIME

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