All Comments on 'The Show Must Go On Ch. 05'

by DavePunter

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
a bit

disappointing. I didn't know it just needs an "accident" kind of and all women turn complete sluts and give random guys everything they denied their husbands and not even once have a bad or guilty feeling.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
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What sort of comment is that?

This is "Literotica" - erotic stories - not the work of Graham Greene. Readers are not necessarily interested in someone's deepest guilt.

Well done, Dave! Let's have more of the same.

DavePunterDavePunterabout 16 years agoAuthor
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Strange comment. What do you expect? Graham Greene? This is Literotica, erotic fiction, so readers are not usually wanting to hear about deep feelings of guilt.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Don't make us wait too long for the follow-up!

I'm liking the setup, just don't make us wait too long for Chapter 6.

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