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An April Headline

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by Anonymous

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by WickedEve04/03/08

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Your poem was recommended on the new poems review thread on literotica’s poetry forum.

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by LeBroz04/03/08

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Extraordinarily powerful poem bursting with tragedy and grief. Careful about editing — you'll smother the raw emotions out of it.

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Tearful strength

We don't often understand the life behind a heart-rending headline like that. Your words gave a glimpse.

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by KOLKORE04/06/08

Heart breaking

Thank you for writing this eulogizing/protest poem. Heart breaking.

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by sassynyc04/06/08

shook me to my core.....

this seemed so personal. i first want to say thank you for sharing it with the lit family. the inserts from the article drew me in. your words are heartfelt. i'm sure April hears you.

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by InkedPoet07/04/11

Powerful

This poem went for the jugulars and never let go... full of suspense, power and regrets - the power of regrets - poignant!

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