All Comments on 'An April Headline'

by swallowedscream

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WickedEveWickedEveabout 16 years ago
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Your poem was recommended on the new poems review thread on literotica’s poetry forum.

LeBrozLeBrozabout 16 years ago
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Extraordinarily powerful poem bursting with tragedy and grief. Careful about editing — you'll smother the raw emotions out of it.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Tearful strength

We don't often understand the life behind a heart-rending headline like that. Your words gave a glimpse.

KOLKOREKOLKOREabout 16 years ago
Heart breaking

Thank you for writing this eulogizing/protest poem. Heart breaking.

sassynycsassynycabout 16 years ago
shook me to my core.....

this seemed so personal. i first want to say thank you for sharing it with the lit family. the inserts from the article drew me in. your words are heartfelt. i'm sure April hears you.

InkedPoetInkedPoetalmost 13 years ago
Powerful

This poem went for the jugulars and never let go... full of suspense, power and regrets - the power of regrets - poignant!

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