All Comments on 'Red & Blonde'

by grantvigor

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northbaybearnorthbaybearalmost 16 years ago
Hot table turned

Tasty and lusty story. And, I'm picky about my girl-on-girl stories. Ignore "Anonymous from the South." Keep on writing. I enjoy dialog with my stories. Good show!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
mmm great!

this is hot, definitely should be writing a chapter two.

hammer17hammer17almost 16 years ago
Hot

I agree, you need another chapter at least..

QUAMEY_TQUAMEY_Tabout 13 years ago
okay

I'm stuck....thats it....boo

X6rose6red6XX6rose6red6Xover 12 years ago
:(

That was a little anti-climactic. I mean, come on. You can't stop half-way through their sexual encounter.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Love it

I loved where this story was going, but it was a bit cruel to cut it off like that to the reader. I swear I almost cried (jk lol)

All in all, a very good story. Perhaps if you expanded it a little bit more past the intimate sex part, some of the readers could have been a bit more satisfied.

A good place to cut it of, hinting at a part two maybe, could have been Hannah's boyfriend walking in on the two?

Keep up the awesomeness!!

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