All Comments on 'Out on the Balcony'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Sequel????

You say this is a sequel, and I'd like to read the first story, but where is it? Different author name or web site? Please tell us where it is or post it here.

PaintedPoppyPaintedPoppyalmost 15 years ago
nice slow build

Just wanted to let you know this turned me on. I loved the slow build. It was nice and realistic, too, without all of the silly, over the top stuff you often see in these stories.

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