Guilty Until Proven Innocent

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I doubt some guy raping a chic in an elevator is going to change her mind about him raping and murdering her sister..

It would be a touchy subject and this strikes me as sort of in bad taste. It is written well, though, but the plot is not my cup of tea.

The end is rushed. After such a big build up, you should have drawn it out a bit.

Nice

Nice and short...
I love stories like this with a nice ending.
Good job, great writer.

A fantasy

It is a story,Okay! It's Fake. Just read it enjoy it and get on with your life.

:)

a good story and a great ending

ridiculous

Come on,now. You could have come up with something better than that. Just a rape made her believe that he didnt rape her sister ?

Beautiful

I wish I was the woman in the elevator

Sarah, London England - leathercatsuitgirl@hotmail.co.uk

Raping someone proves you aren't a rapist? Oooookay. I'll give you credit, this isn't the most retarded thing that has shown up in non-con, but the ridiculous does take the titillation out of it. When the reader should be enjoying, they're going "Wtf?"