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by lckscknfck7

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hammer17hammer17almost 16 years ago
Hot

Give us more, Please......

verbicideverbicidealmost 11 years ago
It was okay

Call me a romantic, or maybe I'm just becoming less enthralled with meaningless hook-ups in my old age, but the story was missing something for me. Sure, great sex is important and all that, but there didn't seem to be any real emotional connection between the two protagonists of the story. In the end, it was about as erotic as a trip to the gym.

lckscknfck7lckscknfck7almost 11 years agoAuthor
You're right... it was okay.

One of my earlier works. Sometimes it goes somewhere, and sometimes it doesn't. Jill and Lindie went somewhere. I hope to revisit Lindie, soon.

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