by lckscknfck7
Call me a romantic, or maybe I'm just becoming less enthralled with meaningless hook-ups in my old age, but the story was missing something for me. Sure, great sex is important and all that, but there didn't seem to be any real emotional connection between the two protagonists of the story. In the end, it was about as erotic as a trip to the gym.
One of my earlier works. Sometimes it goes somewhere, and sometimes it doesn't. Jill and Lindie went somewhere. I hope to revisit Lindie, soon.