All Comments on 'Sweet Talk Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Unique

Your story setup is really unique. I think the back and forth is well done. It's a nice way to build anticipation with a slow burn that shows promise to go past boiling later. Well done.

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