All Comments on 'Bachelor Party Vengeance'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Party Time

One of the best stories I've read. Well written with a twist. Looking forward to the next chapter. Maybe work, birthday, Halloween? Keep writing.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Stupid people do stupid things.

Where is the follow up medical testing over the next few months, and the lack of sex due to not infecting people uselessly? Everyone's hooker/stripper is someone else's lover/sister/wife/mother.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
A Rollicking Fine Read

Very well done erotic story, a good reward to all, including the readers. It is well written and titillating, what else is needed on this site, James Joyce?!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
I loved it!

I loved this story! I wish I was Zeenat there!

Thank you for sharing

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
amazing stuff

amazing work... if i was zeenat i wud never destroy the tape

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Lucky Zee

Quite nice especially the end. Most India wives from conservative backgrounds think of this. Zeenat was lucky that she had sex with husband's friends

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Very predictable. Would have been so much better, if they had gotten their revenge.

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