All Comments on 'The List Ch. 03'

Please keep it coming (cumming?). You're doing a good job, but be sure to proofread for continuity.

There'd better be a whole helluva lot more where this came from.

mindy been your friend and you treat her like shit.still a nerd or a asshole.good writing writer.

This is an awesome story! The nerd is an asshole but that's part of the charm of the whole thing.

I would love to see the series develop and the introduction of new characters. I Don't know how many chapters you are planning but I will be reading every one...Great work

U may want 2 'spread it around' & that's your right but U.O.Mindy so I think u'd better re-think your plans 4 her!

U may want 2 'spread it around' & that's your right but U.O.Mindy so I think u'd better re-think your plans 4 her!

I really admire your style of writing this like it's getting his revenge on the entire system. Everyone can relate to being a laughing stock at school. I am cheering for his character and can't wait to read more. Chapters 1 & 2 are great too. 5 stars

walter mitty with a foot long cock.