All Comments on 'Overtime'

Very good story. I liked the set up, and the casualness of the encounter. Good work.

Your prose moves with a beautiful flow, and the sex is quite natural. Any chance for a sequel?

great set up. i hope there are going to be more

Thanks Alex for sharing it with us. I am glad and thrilled that You have other(s) in the pipline!

Do go on!

All the best

John

nicely erotic/romance mix. Well done and I look forward to the next.

The longer character Dev leads to a better story to enjoy.

Thanks!

Please do add to this. The buildup was very nice and unrushed as other stories have. I look forward to sequels to this.

it was similar to others you have written with pool, nudity, and sex - pretty predictable. I'd like to have seen Becky make an appearance and make it a threesome and then a bit of girl-girl before ending with a final twosome. Good story, however, to remember as I draw the covers and dream. Thanks for getting back into the groove. I look forward to many more.

Just delightful, realistic, sensitive, enjoyable to read and easy to imagine. Thank you.